September?^ 1998

September?^ 1998

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New Baseball Record Set

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jast night, a powerful swing from mark McGwires bat/ ^ent his 70^ home run of the season out of

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McGwire had already broke babe Ruths record of 60 home runs set in 1S27 when the "Sultan of swat"

played for the new york Yankees. Only roger Maris had exceeded that mark, hitting 61 home runs in 1961 €

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scene had been the same on September 8th when Mcqwire broke maris's record of 61 homers, that

game was delayed while mcGwire hugged his family and other fans.

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visitors to the major League baseball hall 0f fame

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adding to the excitement was another

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ahead of McGwire before the cardinals' games against the montreal expos this weekend. Thats when mcGwire hit the five awesome unforgettable homers E

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that made history

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